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Dragon Ball: Realm; Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr. venture into Demon God Realm.
Topic Started: Mar 17 2011, 09:17 PM (2,318 Views)
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Alright, now, this will be my first attempt at creating a long and descriptive fanfic that conveys to you, the reader, what I envision DB could be after GT. This is a single saga covering the late-teenhood of Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr. in an epic that entails them facing off against demons and gods. Some of you may remember me doing a couple shorts about this story quite a few months ago. Well now I have finally decided to do it in full and finish it as my first real fanfic. Sit back, and enjoy the ride.


Dragon Ball: Realm, Part I: Rivalry


A little over a hundred years after Goku was taken up by Shenron... In a dark and obscure, unknown place...


Demon God 2: "Our plans have been set back."

Demon God 1: "No doubt, all of them have been brushed aside."

Demon God 3: "Originally they were meant to be children of our will, but now they have become agents of good."

Demon God 1: "It is time then...time to wipe the slate clean."

Demon God 2: "Yes. We will destroy them for turning against their nature-our nature!"

Demon Gods: "Oblivion to the Saiyans!"



Back on Earth, near West City College...

Goku Jr: "Hey! Vegeta!"

Vegeta Jr: "Huh?! Goku?? Why are you here?"

Goku Jr: "To train! Remember, you promised to train with me today!"

Vegeta Jr: "Agghhh!!! Can't you go bug somebody else right now, I got studying to do today! Maybe you wouldn't understand because you aren't in college, but my mom wants me to grow up with an education. So beat it!"

Goku Jr: "What could be more of an education than learning how to best your rival??"

Vegeta Jr: "You?! MY rival?? When's the last time you ever beat me in combat???"

Goku Jr: "So I don't win against you that many times, big deal! I still make you work to beat me!"

Vegeta Jr: "In your dreams. I just make it seem like you're doing better than you actually are so you won't feel bad."

Goku Jr: "Come on Vegeta! Just for today. I won't butt-in on your studies anymore this week."

Vegeta Jr: "... Fine! But you better not bail out on me early OR wimper when I beat you!"

Goku Jr. gleams with joy as they race off to their favorite battle site: an old temple, surrounded by waterfalls, sitting on mountain terrain covered in plant-life.

Goku Jr: "Ready?"

Vegeta Jr: "I don't know, are you??"

Both turn into Super Saiyans, radiating the inner temple with golden rays of light. They commence. Goku Jr is the first to leap forward, but Vegeta quickly reacts by throwing a ki blast. Goku Jr uses the afterimage to dodge it, and the blast goes right through him, hitting the wall of the already ruined temple. Goku Jr appears from behind and tries to kick Vegeta Jr in the side using a roundhouse kick directed to the abdomen, but Vegeta catches his leg and swings him forward to the front. While in motion Vegeta pulls backward on Goku's leg, causing Goku Jr to come towards him, and Vegeta punches Goku Jr right below the chin with his left arm. Goku flies back but regains himself by reaching for the floor and bouncing himself back on his feet.

Vegeta Jr: "Come now! Let's not repeat this again! Heh heh!"

Goku Jr stares at Vegeta Jr with intensity, ready for round two.

Goku Jr. "This time...your done!"

Goku Jr starts by creating two energy disks with his arms extended on both sides of his body. He throws them with great ferocity. One disk goes straight towards Vegeta while the other goes up and over Vegeta's position. Vegeta Jr. uses a ki blast to try and blow up the one coming straight at him, but the energy disk cuts right through it. By this time the second disk is bearing down on Vegeta Jr from above. Vegeta moves to the left, dodging both disks. The first disk turns sharply towards Vegeta's moving position and the second disk goes through the floor.

Vegeta Jr. "You fool! Are you trying to kill me?!"

The second disk comes up out of the floor and into the path of Vegeta Jr, obstructing his way. Vegeta Jr flips upwards, causing the disks to hit each other creating a huge spark-filled bang, just barely missing Vegeta Jr's head. As the explosion occurs and as Vegeta is still upside down, Goku Jr, waiting for the oppurtunity, grabs Vegeta and proceeds downwards hitting Vegeta's head on and through the ground floor, creating a huge explosion of rocks and dust. Due to the sheer force of the impact, half the temple collapses down the mountain having been split in half. Goku Jr. let's go of Vegeta Jr, who is knocked out, and returns to normal. Their favorite fighting ground has been destroyed because of Goku Jr's anger.

As Vegeta Jr lies unconscious in the rubble...

Goku Jr: "Sorry Vegeta, but I had to prove myself, even if it meant using drastic measures."

A couple hours later, Vegeta Jr awakes to Goku Jr standing out on a ledge overlooking a waterfall and the setting sun. Vegeta, bleeding from his head, clothes torn and ripped, proceeds to stand slowly. He walks toward Goku Jr until he is right behind him.

There is a silence for a small while.

Vegeta Jr: "I know how much that win meant to you. You got me good. Next time, try not almost killing me."

Goku Jr turns and looks at Vegeta Jr smiling. Vegeta holds out his right hand upwards towards Goku, and they clasp hands together. Vegeta Jr smiles.

Meanwhile, a lurking shadow-figure watches from afar off in secret.

Mysterious Person: "Impressive. How long will you stand against my blade Saiyans?! I wait for your blood!"


That's the end of the first part. I'm going to add new parts every day or every other day. Stay tuned.
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I liked this a lot. I do enjoy Goku Jr and Vegeta Jr and always wonder what would happen to them. I wish you would start at the world tournment but I guess them at College is good as well. I'll read the next chapter if you keep at it.
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Preeetttyyyy cool,Goku J and Vegeta J are very intresting characters that I myself have written about on another site.

Being a writer myself,and being very book-like at writing,script fics dont appeal to me that much,but this,this is cool.

I hope You keep at it and do the writing world proud,should You ever need any help whatesoever,happy to help.

Have fun,1st chapter:
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So, in your guys' opinion, what did you like? Was it the fighting, the story, or what? What do you think I could do better on?
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I like how Vegeta Jr was sorta like Vegeta but at the same time he was he's own person. He didn't pout as much as Vegeta. I like what you did with the overcompensating "You're not alone" feel to the story. I can't say anything negative aside from make it longer next time.
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Heh, longer eh? Man. Alright. But cool. I figured Vegeta Jr would be similar to Vegeta in many ways, having seen the end of DBGT, but he's also not as prideful, because he didn't go through the upbringing Vegeta had. So I tried to blend those things together. And yeah, since Goku and Vegeta are going to go through a lot together, it's important that they have a strong bond. Even though they're rivals, they're still close friends.
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Are we going to read about any other Z character descendants in the next chapter?
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Well, I have a few familiar characters in mind to introduce later, and I have a few surprise characters in store for the future chapters as well. So, yeah, kinda.
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Who's the parents of the juniors? Do we know more about them?
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I...might be inclined to explain about their parents, but the story is going to be focused a lot more on them and the plot.
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Sasuke says make it longer to every fic he reads,dont worry about it.

IMO,the only thing that stands out in my view is,script fic,but as I said,Im fine with it.
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Dragon Ball: Realm, Part 2: Assassin!

The following day, we find Goku and Vegeta about their daily lives. One trains. One goes to school and trains. But both are content in their simple but self-satisfying lives. However, on this day, unknown to them, their lives will change forever.

Somewhere near Mt. Paozu...

Goku Jr: "I think that should be ebough training for the day."

Goku Jr gasps for breath as he proceeds back to his new house. As he enters, he catches sight once again of the picture of his beloved Grandma Pan. Missing her greatly, he picks the photo up, case and all.

Goku Jr: "... Granny... I should go visit her."

Near dusk, Goku Jr heads for his grandmother's gravesite, near a waterfall, a mile near Goku Sr's old house. As Goku Jr finally arrives, he kneels down by the tombstone, which has the inscription: "Gone, but always in my heart."

Goku Jr: "We haven't spoken for a while... I just... I just wanted to come see you again. Hey! Guess what?! I beat Vegeta! You would be so proud of me! I did him in good. He even admitted it! ... I wish you were there to see it. Grandma? Do me a favor. Look after me. I miss you so much. I wish you were still here, but...I know I need to be strong and keep moving forward. I love you, and I'm always thinking of you. Take care."

Goku Jr rises, pauses, staring at the grave, and then finally turns... Suddenly, a black shadow moves out of the forest silently but with great speed. It draws it's long sword and attempts a silent charge from the air. Goku Jr senses something, but he doesn't know what it is. As he turns around, he reacts without pause, catching the five-foot-long blade inbetween the palms of his hands.

Goku Jr: "What the-hell?"

The demon, remaining silent, is clothed in all black and wears a sheath on his back for his five foot long blade. He wears a black mask made of cloth, and his red eyes are ever piercing. On his shoulder's are armored spaulders.

Goku Jr: "Who are you, and why are you trying to kill me?"

Anonymous Demon: "You'll know soon enough, but for now let's TURN UP THE HEAT!!!"

Anonymous pulls back on the blade with great force, releasing it from the grasp of Goku. Knowing that Anonymous could do this Goku turns Super Saiyan and prepares for battle.

Anonymous: "That ***** won't save you!"

Anonmous turns his blade forward towards Goku and charges in attack.

Anonymous: "Thunder Clap!"

Anonymous' blade starts to emit lightning sparks as he thrusts it forward. The sky is filled with lightning as the attack begins to take precedence. Suddenly, Goku Jr is hit with a thunder bolt and a loud bang, blowing some of his clothes off and sending him flying through the forest, leaving him charred.

Goku Jr: "What the hell is this guy? And why does he want to kill me? And what the hell was that attack? Gotta find a way to survive, or else..."

Anonymous: "That got him. Saiyan scum."

Goku Jr stands, burnt, and shaking.

Calling into the deep forest, Anonymous yells, "Do you know why they sent me Saiyan?! It's because I know how to get the job done! Now, are we going to continue, or did that little charge of mine already shake you up? HA HA!!"

Goku Jr: "I don't want to destroy my grandma's grave site. I got to lead him away!" Goku takes off away from the area as fast as he can.

Anonymous: "What?! Running?! I knew I was too good for you!" Anonymous takes off after Goku Jr with great speed.

Goku Jr: "Ahh, he's gaining on me. I guess right here is good enough." Goku Jr lands and unleashes a small barrage of energy waves. Anonymous deflects the first three then slices the other two in half while he lands, creating a small window of diversion which Goku Jr siezes. As Anonymous lands Goku Jr comes from behind and punches the demon in the fac, sending him back a little ways, and then follows up with a step and a left backspinning kick to his face, and finally tries to end it with a side push kick. But the demon grabs his leg, blocking and catching the kick.

Anonymous: "Gonna pay for that!"

Having Goku caught, he moves forward with a right legged kick under Goku's leg to the groin, making Goku scream. He then throws Goku to his right side, following it up with an orange colored ki wave. The ki hits Goku and keeps exploding until ten explosons have taken place, leaving the the forest decimated and Goku badly injured."

Anonymous picks Goku up out of the rubble. " How'd you like that? ... Are you dead yet Saiyan? You shouldn't have underestimated me. I know you have more power in you then that. And guess what?" Anonymous moves to Goku Jr's ear. "So do I. Oh well, I guess the game is over. Time to look for your buddy." He throws Goku into the air and launches a ki blast to finish him, but out of nowhere SSjin Vegeta Jr comes down and smashes the blast back at Anonymous, moving him into the Earth, creating an underground explosion. Vegeta catches Goku and brings him to a safe spot.

Vegeta Jr: "Goku, you idiot, why didn't you fight this guy at full power? You beat me yesterday and now you have the gall to loose to this piece of trash. What do you think that says about me?"

Goku Jr: "Vegeta... I ... thanks."

Goku Jr: "Just rest now. I got this guy."

Vegeta leaves Goku and returns to the battle siite.

Vegeta Jr: "Come on you bastard, show yourself!"

Anonymous appears right behind him with his sword drawn. "Only if you knew!"

Vegeta Jr realizes he's behind him and starts dodging Anonymous' blade strikes. Vegeta tries to create some distant by flying away and throwing some blasts. Anonymous blocks them all and they both land on the ground.

Vegeta Jr: "Who the hell are you?"

Anonymous: "If you beat me I'll tell you."

Vegeta Jr: "That's it?"

Vegeta turns Super Saiyan 2. Lightning and sparks explode through the ground creating snake-like lines below. "How do you like this?"

Anonymous: "It's nothing I cannot handle. HAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!! Hu-hu-ha-ha-ha!!!!"

Now powered up, Anonymous' mask comes off, revealing blue skin and no hair underneath. He is also much bigger, and his aura is orange accompanied with bleeping noises manifested in the form of popping orange bubbles of ki.

Anonymous: "What now Saiyan? I commend you that you have such power, and coming to fight saves me some time, but all the same, you will die here tonight."

Vegeta stares at the demon.

Vegeta Jr: "I prefer you are the one to choke and die. I'll make you a nice tombstone. Or perhaps you prefer cremation?

Anonymous: "Ha ha ha ha ha!!! DIE!!!!"

Anonymous charges Vegeta with two ki blasts in his hands throwing them half-way from his initial starting point. Vegeta remains calm and smacks both of them away from himself use one hand for each blast simultaneously. Immediately afterwards he slams his hands together and yells, unleashing a massive blast towards Anonymous, but he dodges it, flipping upwards over it and employing a downwards kick onto Vegeta while upside down in mid-air. Vegeta blocks however, and the demon flips around facing Vegeta straight on. They engage in hand-to-hand combat, both landing blows on each other, but Vegeta starts to come out on top, sending the demon more and more backwards. finally, overwhelmed, the demon uses a kiai to blow Vegeta away from him, which is successful, but only for a moment, as Vegeta regains himself. At this instant, Anonymous shoots continuous eye beams at Vegeta, forcing him to continually move around. Vegeta keeps moving however and gradually comes closer and closer to Anonymous [sort of like how Gohan was supposed to gain ground on Piccolo during their training in the Saiyan saga, but way better]. finally, Vegeta is in Anonymous' personal space. Anonymous tries to throw a punch, but Vegeta spins around to the right and dodges it, then retaliating with his own barrage of punches, ending with a spanning back-fisted punch, forcing anonymous to the floor on one knee and arm. Anonymous looks up at Vegeta in pain, bleeding all over himself, but Vegeta remains ever so cool as he rains a down a final blow onto Anonymous sending him through the ground.

Vegeta backs away from the area, shaking from the intensity of the fight, sparks still plaguing the ground from his aura.

Vegeta: "I was expecting more from the one who put my rival down."

Suddenly, an eerie orange glow struck the atmosphere, and the area quickly exploded. Vegeta quickly evacuated the area.

Vegeta Jr: "I hope Goku is alright after that blast."

Anonymous comes out of the rubble, clothes and armor ripped apart, face bleeding, and body scratched and cut.

Anonymous: "S-Saiyans aren't supposed to possess this kind of cunning and power!! You should be quivering at my feet Saiyan dog! You betrayed us! And now, now, you think you can continue to defy us?! You will pay the price for turning against our intended will!

Vegeta Jr: "What are you talking about?"

Anonymous: "You haven't defeated me yet but I suppose you've merited some information. After all, you will still die. You should at least know the truth before it happens. Long ago my kind created you Saiyans to wreak havoc and cause destruction across the universe. It worked for some while, although, the last remaining of you turned to the side of good, and started to undo our plans for the destruction of your universe. You see, there is more than just one. We have our own plane, and you have yours. But we are in direct competition. We planted you here so you could take the competition out for us. My masters sent me here to kill the last remaining of the Saiyans. Even ones as convuluted as you still possess dominate enough genes to tap into your hidden power, the potential of which was laid within each one of you. Although, not even we knew how powerful you may become. Our plan would've probably backfired anyway. Who knows, your race might've wised up and eventually found us... But do you see? You are a failed plan. We let you live long enough!"

Vegeta Jr: "Heh. As if! This "failed plan" is still *****ing you up! What are you going to do about it?"

Anonymous: Ohhhh. I'll end it... I'll make it aaaallllllll better now... Just you wait and see..."

Anonymous reaches out his hand, and his sword returns to him from the rubble. Screaming and laughing maniacally, Anonymous grips his sword with both his hands and extends it outwards toward Vegeta.

Vegeta Jr: "Pfft. Freak!"

Anonymous: "You, Saiyan, will die by the hand of Baku the Demon Assassin!!!"

Vegeta Jr: "Whatever! Just get on with it!"

Anonymous pulls back on his blade creating an orange aura of lightning around his sword, then screams "Sonic Thunder Clap!" He shoots the blast forward moving it at lightning speed.

Vegeta quickly uses his new special attack, the "Rebound Cannon", to launch it back at Baku. He is taken by surprise and blown across the landscape in a swirling thunder of orange energy. A huge thunder clap sounds in the final explosion, leaving nothing left of Baku or the land surrounding. As rocks and dust settle onto the earth, Vegeta stands triumphant and proud. But he remembers that Goku is still out there and injured, so he goes to find him using his ki sensing ability.

After some searching Vegets finally finds Goku...

Vegeta Jr: Goku, I got him!

Goku Jr, laying by a tree near a small creek replies, "Vegeta? Y-you really did it? Did the creature say anything about why he was here?"

Vegeta Jr pauses for a moment then tells him all that the demon Baku had explained.

A little while later...

Goku Jr: "So these guys came here to kill us... Your family and all of our friends are in danger as long as we are here."

Vegeta Jr: "Yeah, so what do you suggest?"

Goku Jr: "We find them, and kill them before they kill us or our family."

Vegeta Jr: "How?"

Goku Jr: "I know somebody that might know how to help us find where we need to go."

Vegeta Jr: "Well, first, we need to heal our wounds, especially you. What were you thinking, fighting the demon at Super Saiyan? You know better. A creature that powerful should be destroyed at full power, not toyed with."

Goku Jr: "I thought I could beat him."

Vegeta Jr sighs.

Vegeta Jr: "Fool."


End of chapter 2.
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Impressive...most impressive.
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keeeep it coming. i want to know what happens next.
list of canon sources:

the DB manga, and the Dr. Slump manga as it applies to the crossover during the rra saga.

list of non canon sources:

everything else, regardless of origin, format, or quality.

for those that blindly follow word of god
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Sorry for the delay. I haven't had much time to write this stuff. You guys seem to want more so I'll continue.

Dragon Ball: Realm, Part 3: Preparation

After the defeat of Baku, we find our heroes standing amongst a devastated mountainous terrain. The sun is blocked by the skies, which are blackened with smoke from the battle. Vegeta carries Goku up in his arms...

Vegeta Jr: "Come on Goku. I've got to get you over to my mother's in West City. She has the best healing devices."

Goku Jr: "But wait, my house...!"

Vegeta Jr: "I'm sure it's still standing! Right now we need to get you healed!"

Vegeta takes off into the air with Goku and a little while later Vegeta arrives with Goku at Capsule Corp, but Goku is passed out... As they are walking towards the front entrance they are stopped by a security guard.

Vegeta Jr: "(Almost there Goku)"

Security Guard: "Excuse me sir, identification please! I can't let you through here without knowing who you are."

Vegeta Jr: "Does it look like we have ID papers on us?! Quit fooling around and let me in you imbecile; you know who I am!"

Security Guard: "I'm sorry sir, but I don't recall ever seeing you. If you don't have ID papers I can't let you in."

Vegeta Jr: "This is a waste of time! Get outta my way!"

Vegeta walks towards the doorway...

Security Guard: "SIR! Please step away, or I will be forced to inflict injury upon you!"

Vegeta smirks as he walks even closer. The security guard reaches for his baton.

Security Guard: "I warned you! Hiiyyyaaaahhh!!!!!"

Vegeta tosses Goku's body up into the air and catches the guards baton, then slaps him through the doors. As the guard bursts through the doors Vegeta catches Goku and walks through.

Security Guard: "Code Red!!! Code RED!!! We have an intruder!"

The other guards at the post look up at Vegeta...

Guards: "Oh, Vegeta!!"

They roll out a red carpet and bow down as they let Vegeta pass.

Security Guard: "What are you fools doing?!"

Another guard grabs his mouth and speaks in a lower tone.

Security Guard 2: "Idiot! Keep your mouth shut! That's the son of the president of Capsule Corporation, May! Do you want to get fired?!"

Security Guard 1: "WHAAAHHHH?!?!"

Vegeta Jr proceeds through the security check-in station, past the open terrarium and into the medical center.

Vegeta Jr: "Hello doctor. I need you to heal my friend. He's badly injured."

Doctor: "My God, what happened?! You boys have been fighting again I see... Well come, let's put him into the rejuvenation chamber!"

They strap him into a chamber that resembles Freeza's old ones, but they are more advanced.

Vegeta Jr: "How long is this going to take?"

Doctor: "Oh, about thirty minutes for this ones injuries. I'm surprised that he's still alive-he's burnt all over!"

Vegeta Jr: "I'll leave him in your capable hands then doctor."

Doctor: "Where are you off to?"

Vegeta Jr: "To see my mother."

Doctor: "She doesn't come in for another ten minutes!"

Vegeta Jr: "Then I'll wait."

Ten minutes later Vegeta stands in May's office. As she walks in, May is speaking to her assistant.

May: "Tell him that I'm not going to deal with them if they can't even guarantee the safety of my products."

Assistant: "Yes ma'am!!"

The assistant exits the room. As May turns she sees Vegeta standing in front of the window looking out into the city.

May: "Son...what are you doing here?"

Vegeta Jr: "What? Am I not aloud to see my own kin? Listen, there's something I need to tell you."

May: "Well make it quick, cause I have a meeting in about 10 minutes."

Vegeta Jr: "This is important! LISTEN! Goku and I ran into a bit of trouble. Everybody is in danger."

May: "What? H-how? Why??"

Vegeta Jr: "You may not believe me, but..."

Vegeta tells his mother the entire story.

Vegeta Jr: "And that's why we need to go there and settle this. As long as we are here you and everybody else are in danger."

May looks as if she actually doesn't believe her son, but goes on to say, "What do you need?"

Vegeta Jr smiles.

Vegeta Jr: "Pills."

Assisstant: "Ma'am, it's time for the meeting!"

May: "Alright son, just tell him to give you everything you need."

Vegeta exits the room and first makes his way to his room where he changes into a dark green colored suit, similar to Vegeta Sr's except the leg area is cut for shorts, and his gloves are quite, except the finger slots are cut short as well. As he is now dressed Vegeta Jr makes his way to the lower laboratory.

*BEEP* *BEEP* *BEEP*

Doctor: "OH! Looks like he's finally healed!"

The doctor opens the chamber and Goku steps out.

Doctor: "Young lad, your friend left you some clothes. He said you might like them."

Goku Jr: "Guess I'll have to. My clothes are all shredded. But wow! I feel fantastic!"

Doctor: "That's good to hear. Put these on quick. I believe your friend is waiting for you."

Goku Jr dresses himself in a white top and bottom similar to Vegeta's, except Goku's wearing full pants, not shorts. He then straps around his wrists red bands, and puts on some red boots with yellow laces. And finally, he ties a red band around his head. Goku Jr then sets out to find his friend.

As Vegeta Jr arrives at the elevator...

Goku Jr: "Vegeta!"

Vegeta Jr: "Hey, Goku! Lookin' good!"

Goku Jr: "This place is awesome! I haven't been here in a while too. Things look different."

Vegeta Jr: "Yes, we've done some remodelling a-"

Goku Jr: "Where are you going?"

Vegeta Jr: "I was about to explain that! If you just stop in-"

Goku Jr: "We need some of those enhancer pills you used to use for the upcoming fights!"

Vegeta Jr: "Yes, th-"

Goku Jr: "Is that where we're headed off to?"

Vegeta glares at Goku in disgust and turns around to to call the elevator.

Vegeta Jr: "Just shut up and follow me."

Both enter the elevator and proceed to the lower laboratory.

As the doors open they lay their eyes upon a strange man working on something near a heap of assorted metal devices. The laboratory is dark, save for the spot which the strange man is working.

Vegeta Jr: "I'll warn you Goku. This guy is strange."

Goku Jr: "Hm. Really?"

Goku and Vegeta proceed to the man's work station.

Vegeta Jr: "Professor Adler!"

... ... ...

Vegeta Jr: "Ahem! PRO! FESS! OR! AD! LEEEERRRRRRR!!!!!!!"

Professor Adler: "Oh! My boy you're here! I'm glad. I am in the process of creating a device that increases the speed of the electrical impulses of the brain allowing for faster thinking, movement, and reaction time. However, the time of which the brain is affected I'm afraid is very limited, and I'm not quite sure of the after-effect, although, I think I can be sure that too much use of this device may result in your nervous system undergoing a most unpleasant state of longterm pain. But! What can I do for your today?"

Vegeta Jr: "We need some health, strength, and stamina boosters."

Professor Adler: "Just in time my boy! I have three of each prepared. Uh, do take good care of yourselves when taking these, they are more potent than the last ones. I don't want you dying from taking them."


Vegeta Jr: "Heh, don't worry about it Professor Adler, we'll take them. Is there anything else you have in store for us?"

Professor Adler: "Well... I do have one thing but... I don't know if I should give it to you."

Vegeta Jr: "Who else are you going to test it with, yourself?"

Professor Adler: "Good point. Alright."

Adler walks to another table revealing a device.

Goku Jr: "So what is it?"

Professor Adler: "Vegeta. I've known you for a long time, and I know that you can do things that are quite abnormal. Noting the nature of your energy over the years I've come up with a formula that actually is able to alter that energy and manifest it into either, fire, wind, electrcity, or ice. I haven't tested it, but, I think that it will work with you. As always though, I'm not sure of the after-effects. And I'm not sure how long the effects last for. The device goes around the wrist, and you merely and simply just press which type of element you would like your energy turned into. And Voila!

Vegeta Jr: "Well, regardless, I think we should bring it along Goku to test this thing out."

Vegeta puts the device and the pills in his bag.

Professor Adler: "Excuse me sir, are you going on a trip of some kind?"

Vegeta Jr: "Yeah, something like that. Thank you professor for everything, but now it's time for my friend and I to jet."

Professor Adler: "Alright my boy! You be careful out there!"

Goku and Vegeta exit the laboratory and make their way up back to the surface compound.

Vegeta Jr: "Now, Goku. It's time to tell me how you plan to get us over to that Demon Realm."

Goku Jr: "Well, when I was young my grandmother Pan took me there to train. I still remember where it's located generally. It's called Kami's Lookout. It's where the Guardian of the Earth presides."

Vegeta Jr: "Heh, if he's the guardian then how come we're doing his job for him?"

Goku Jr: "Just make sure you don't speak like that to him. He's got a bodyguard up there and I'm sure he won't take kindly to disrespect."

Vegeta Jr: "Whatever. Let's get going."

Goku Jr: "Okay."

Goku and Vegeta fly to the area Goku last remembers the Lookout being.

Goku Jr: "Where is it? I thought it was right here."

Vegeta Jr: "Agghh! I knew you didn't know where it was! Now what do we do?"

Goku Jr: "Over here Vegeta! See that long pole going up into the sky?"

Vegeta Jr: "We're already in the sky! It look like it's going up into space!"

Goku Jr: "Come on! That's gotta be it!"

Vegeta follows Goku up to the Lookout.

Goku and Vegeta finally reach the top of the Lookout. The Lookout is remodeled, now having two main temples on each side and a huge courtyard garden in the middle, with a small sanctum at the head of the garden.

Goku Jr: "HELLO! Anybody here?"

Vegeta Jr: "Talk about being informal!"

They proceed to the garden area while Goku Jr keeps calling out. As they reach the middle area of the garden they are met with a greeting.

"Who do you seek?"

Goku and Vegeta turn around to find themselves gazing at a Namek.

Goku Jr: "Are you Dende?"

Namekian: "I am not. But I'm afraid without being summoned or invited you can't see him."

Vegeta Jr: "Listen, we don't have time to play patty-cake with you! You bring him out here now!"

Namekian: "I cannot. I already told you. Now, leave. Or else I will be forced to make you."

Vegeta Jr: "Alright Goku stand aside!"

Goku Jr: "Wait, Vegeta! You can't just fight this guy! We're here on peaceful terms!"

Vegeta Jr: "And look where that policy has gotten us! No! The lizard man wants to fight instead! Ain't that right?"

Namekian: "I warned you. It's your move."

Vegeta Jr: "Grand!"

Vegeta turns Super Saiyan.

Vegeta Jr: "Let's see what frog-man has!"

Vegeta Jr dashes towards him but the Namekian disappears.

Vegeta Jr: "WHAT??"

Vegeta Jr stands trying to sense his location. Suddenly, the Namek appears behind him throwing a knife hand chop to the back of his neck, but Vegeta bends his body to the right dodging it. He then elbows the Namekian to the face from behind with his left arm, sweeps the Namekian's right leg with his right leg while he's still facing the opposite way. This trips the Namek and causes him to fall to the right side. The Namek catches his fall with his right hand. Vegeta turns around and tries to kick him in the chest with his left leg, but the Namek blocks it with his left arm. Still, the force of the attack launches the Namekian back. He regains composure and lands on his feet.

Namekian: "Not bad at all. But you have yet to see how far I'm willing to go to keep the protocol of this sacred place."

A voice then calls out, "That's enough! No more. This is sacred ground."

Out of the small sanctum at the end of the garden comes another Namekian, now, quite a bit older.

Dende: "I am the Guardian of the Earth. What do you want, Goku?"


End of Chapter 3.
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